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Art: the face of spring reloaded.

I redid an older pic so I have something to submit to the Painter book. I'm not sure whether it turned out good or just plain crappy -- I'm happy enough, but considering how long I've stared at her she could look like Quasimodo by now and I wouldn't notice, so... yeah.

The pic is here for whoever's interested: [The face of spring - take two].

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____chuu
Oct. 23rd, 2005 01:56 pm (UTC)
Incredibly beautiful \:D/ Especially the eyes, and the what-it-appears-to-me-to-be nest - and yay for incoherency ♥
The details astound me ♥
technoelfie
Oct. 24th, 2005 07:33 am (UTC)
Thanks! I tried to make this more detailed than my usual stuff. I still have much to learn, however. :)
kookie315
Oct. 23rd, 2005 05:37 pm (UTC)
Yeah right, crappy.... LMAO.

You know it's gorgeous!
technoelfie
Oct. 24th, 2005 07:34 am (UTC)
Thank you! :) There are a few problems with it though, so I'll have to redo some of it.
(Anonymous)
Oct. 24th, 2005 01:17 am (UTC)
Is it on purpose that I kind of expect a fairy romance novel title to appear on the blue sky part somewhen?
The picture is nice and very well done but it lacks...
...how should I say, a bit of the thrill your other works have. It doesn't have this "alive" feeling in the motif, though the handiwork itself is perfect.
akk_
Oct. 24th, 2005 01:19 am (UTC)
*oops* that would be me, sorry. Failed to notice that I wasn't logged in.
technoelfie
Oct. 24th, 2005 07:37 am (UTC)
Thanks for the useful feedback! I read the comments at DeviantArt, and most people seem to agree that while this is one of my better works, technique-wise, it lacks a certain spark compared to the original.

I was so very worried about my technique while working on this that I must have lost sight of the big picture, and the message I was trying to get across. I'll work on it some more and try to add more detail while rectifying the mistakes that people have pointed out to me. :)
eamane_elensar
Oct. 24th, 2005 11:59 am (UTC)
CopyCat?
I sent you a note about this on devart, but you might not have gotten it yet.

This looks really similar to one of your pics: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20885179/

I don't know it that stuff bothers you, but I just thought you'd like to know.
miz_playa
Nov. 24th, 2005 11:37 am (UTC)
Looking at this picture is like just taking a fresh shower...Does that make any sense? I know I saw this on deviantart the other day. I wish I could make art look that nice. ♥
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