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Jin/Fuu drabble.

Reflection

Rating: R to NC-17
Series: Samurai Champloo
Pairing: Jin/Fuu


Jin doesn't like mirrors for fear that one day he'll look and find himself faded. But sometimes he likes seeing himself reflected in her eyes, which are large and dark and the only truly pretty thing about her.

"Come on, Jin," she's telling him now, tugging at his hand. There's childish impatience in her voice but he yields anyway because he likes her looking at him.

"Whipped," Mugen snickers behind them, following through with cruder remarks that dwindle to a low, annoying murmur as Jin leads the girl away. Fuu merely giggles, pulling him behind a tree that doesn't offer enough shelter and stripping the gi off his shoulders.

When they fuck it's hungry and rough, a strange canon of strangled sounds set to the counterpoint of Mugen's muttered complaints.

Each night, Jin convinces himself that it's not as sordid as it appears. Fuu is young and athletic; if she wants tenderness (or privacy), she has yet to let it show.

In a way, it's important that Mugen is close, a not-so-tacit witness. Otherwise Jin might be tempted to hold her afterwards, speak soft words into her small ear while she pants into his sweat-slick shoulder. He might want to stroke her hair and run his large hands down her back while he trails his lips down her smooth cheek.

He might want to tell her he loves her, even if he isn't quite sure how that actually feels.

As it is, he takes care not to stray too far away from the camp, takes care to be giving but not too gentle, wild but not too desperate.

"Jin," Fuu says, pulling him out of his musings. Her small hands are cupping his face (just as his larger ones are cupping her bare ass under the soft fall of her kimono).

"What is it?" he asks wearily. For some reason he is still in her (even though he usually pulls away as soon as he can without being overly rude), her legs are firmly locked around his waist, and they are both dripping on the forest floor.

It's thoroughly undignified, but he can't bring himself to care.

"What is it, Fuu?" he demands again, thinking that maybe she does. He has to admit that he's been asking himself lately how long this was going to last. She looks older now with her hair undone and spilling over one bare shoulder. Maybe she's grown too old to play with the wolf in the woods.

Fuu just smiles and kisses him softly. Her thumbs brush over his cheekbones as she drinks him in, or so it feels, and he hopes that the tight, coiled heat in his stomach is indigestion but rather fears it's something worse.

When she finally pulls away her cheeks are so flushed they glow, and her lips are still close enough that they brush his mouth as she speaks.

"Say, Jin... Can you do slow, too?"

He closes his eyes, leaning his head against the rough bark. Surprising as it is, there's really only one answer.

You only had to ask.

"Yes," he says slowly. "Yes."

He strokes her hair and kisses her cheek. She sighs into his shoulder.

Between her legs, he can feel himself hardening again.

"I was hoping you'd say that," Fuu murmurs, and kisses him again.

In the distance, Mugen is silent.

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hardlyfatal
Dec. 19th, 2004 05:16 pm (UTC)
Ahhhh you saucy minx, what a delicious little story. Jin, Jin... [moans] You got Fuu's cuteness just right, and her perkiness. Lovely.
technoelfie
Dec. 20th, 2004 08:51 am (UTC)
Hah! Jin always gets you, eh? *smiles slyly*

I really, really miss the series. *sigh*
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essie07
Dec. 19th, 2004 07:05 pm (UTC)
MMM... Jin/Fuu. You are absolutely wonderful! Loved the characterizations and especially the way you wrote Jin's thoughts.

*glomp*

Write more Jin/Fuu, will ya? OR... you could draw them in some interesting embraces *cough* like your Sess/Kag artwork.

Either way, luffles you for writing this ficlet.
technoelfie
Dec. 20th, 2004 09:07 am (UTC)
Thanks! ♥

I might write more Jin/Fuu if I get inspired again. As to drawing, I'm not sure I ever could. SC is the one series where I really have no idea how to paint the characters realistically without losing what makes them special. :)
heartpiece
Dec. 20th, 2004 02:56 am (UTC)
You got both their personalities so perfectly~

Lovely work.
technoelfie
Dec. 20th, 2004 03:49 pm (UTC)
Oooh, thanks! XD
indirect
Dec. 21st, 2004 04:28 am (UTC)
:babbles over this and purrrrrrrs: There so needs to be MORE like this! You're wetting my appetite for these charries in such nummy, sweet situations!
technoelfie
Dec. 22nd, 2004 03:31 am (UTC)
Hee, thanks! I'll give my best.
roark28
Dec. 21st, 2004 04:53 am (UTC)
Haha that is hot ^_^
technoelfie
Dec. 22nd, 2004 03:31 am (UTC)
Hot is good. XD
lunaneko
Dec. 21st, 2004 09:21 am (UTC)
This is so delicious...you wrote threesome drabble not long time ago too?

Awesome, please write more! We need more Champloo ficcies outthere! :-)
technoelfie
Dec. 22nd, 2004 03:32 am (UTC)
Yes, I wrote that one too. :) I'm very fond of the series right now... *happy sigh*
wanderingkabuki
Dec. 21st, 2004 11:25 am (UTC)
I said "more" last time... I'm just happy now!! Jin is too hot to be true!! It's cool to have some champloo fics around!! *ç*

*hope you don't mind, I added you to my "goddess-of-champloo-fics" list... I mean, friend list, to read you without moving my fingers to much on the mouse... What? Lazy??*
technoelfie
Dec. 22nd, 2004 03:34 am (UTC)
Jin is practically incandescent. And strangely adorable.

And I don't mind at all! ♥
jesslikewhoa
Dec. 21st, 2004 06:34 pm (UTC)
oh fucking hell, that was so hot..it should be illegal.. (im turned on =X)

more moremore :Ddd fasdkfd
technoelfie
Dec. 22nd, 2004 03:35 am (UTC)
Will try to provide more, but there's no telling when...
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zauberer_sirin
Dec. 26th, 2004 09:29 am (UTC)
OMG. Jinn/Fuu! And done well! Gorgeously well! I think you´ve just made my day (or week or month).
kendokat
Jan. 13th, 2005 05:01 pm (UTC)
Grins! This was very nice. I need to see some Samurai Champloo to understand the charas better. A friend burned me the first eight episodes of CS since I am on dial up and downloading is out of the question . . . too slow. I really like what I have seen of the series but I am crazy about most anything Samurai anyway . . .

I like the way you wrote their passion and their coupling . . . will have to check for more . . . One of my goals in 2005 is writing. I've been lost role playing too long and need to move on to my own full stories. Thanks!
neptune47
Apr. 8th, 2005 10:43 am (UTC)
I know this fic is a few months old now, but I just found it, and I just LOVED it. It was raw and undignified, yet so appropriate for these two, despite the fact that Fuu and Jin are the more mannered of the trio.

And I especially loved this:

"In a way, it's important that Mugen is close, a not-so-tacit witness. Otherwise Jin might be tempted to hold her afterwards, speak soft words into her small ear while she pants into his sweat-slick shoulder. He might want to stroke her hair and run his large hands down her back while he trails his lips down her smooth cheek."

It just shows that you are a genius and that you completely understand Jin's character. Thank you so much for writing this! I'm definitely going to check out your other fics.
idiotgirl
Apr. 17th, 2005 09:53 pm (UTC)
Just found this randomly, and it's so wonderfully and tastefully written. The voices sound like they genuinely belong to the characters. Not only that, but I love the dynamic of the pairing, simply because it's so subtle, in my opinion. Jin is Jin.

I adore this.
leafy_girl
Jul. 16th, 2005 06:12 pm (UTC)
Hiya. I just watched the entire series last night (until 5 am) and so was pining for some Jin/Fuu. Happily, you've delivered. I've been itching to write something myself with them, but nothing is coming.

Thanks for satisfying my little craving. Did I read that you did a threesome drabble with them? Would you mind linking me?

Thanks, and I hope another comes to ya. ^^
angstyalex
Oct. 21st, 2005 12:54 pm (UTC)
WRITEMOREJINFUUSMEXNOW.
sintari
Aug. 2nd, 2006 04:51 pm (UTC)
I just got into the fandom so I'm going back and finding old fic. And guess what? Today I found the good stuff! Jin is so terribly OC that it hurts. The very first paragraph creates a desperation for indentity that lingers throughout the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing this.
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