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Serendipity stuff.

I really, really need to make Bleach and Yakitate icons. *licks Kuro-yan*

I also need to finally finish the second chapter of Serendipity. Will have to try and keep it subdued, although I've become addicted to shoujo mangas lately and their soap-operatic influence is starting to wear me down. Repeat after me: Kagome is not an ingenue. Kakashi is not a rock star. He will not dazzle her with his forceful approach to sex relationships. They will not make out in the second chapter.

He really, really isn't a rock star.

Although, you wouldn't know by what he's wearing...


~
It must have been revenge.

Kakashi came to that conclusion pretty soon into what Kagome had innocuously dubbed their 'little shopping trip'. There was simply no other explanation for what the diabolical girl was doing to him.

What he did not realize was that, from one moment to the next, Kagome's life had gained a hitherto unknown meaning. Because, for the first time in her life, she had a real live puppet at her disposal. A beautiful male puppet with perfect proportions and no will of his own -- at least if she had her way -- and suddenly everything else faded into insignificance.

Her credit card limit?

Who cared.

Souta's school fees?

Seriously, now.

There were so many lights, gleaming surfaces and colorful displays, and next to her a diamond in the rough, just waiting to be shaped. Tugging Kakashi after her Kagome breezed through the aisles, drunk with power.

At the moment she was attacking him with a subtly checkered shirt that she insisted on leaving out of his pants, and a matching necklace that looked more like a dog collar that anything else. He was very aware of the symbolism.

Suspiciously, he watched out of the corner of his eye as she bounced around him, tucking the collar into place, and generally pulling and tweaking at the folds until they were arranged to her satisfaction.

.

.

.

Kakashi contemplated himself in the full-length mirror, particularly fascinated with the length of leather wound around his throat and tied in a silly little knot and the matching metal-studded armbands. Then there were the shredded pants, and the t-shirt with the peculiar slogan "get killed -- get noticed". Kakashi was deeply suspicious of slogans in foreign languages, especially after asking Kagome what the words meant had resulted in much waving of hands and no clear answer at all, but all in all, he had emerged relatively unscathed.

Even if he looked ridiculous.

He smiled. No enemy would recognize him now. Looking underneath the underneath was all well and good, but virtually impossible when blinded by a pink and green monstrosity of a shirt with safety pins hanging from the hem and fishnet inlays which teasingly revealed the pale muscles stretching and bunching beneath.
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Er, yes. Right now the chapter is nearing five thousand words (not a lot, I know), and as soon as I figure out where exactly to end it, I'll post it too.

Comments

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karit
Jul. 26th, 2005 04:20 pm (UTC)
...I have a new appreciation for Kagome. And you. Such delightful mental pictures~! *tears of perverted lust joy*
technoelfie
Jul. 28th, 2005 07:04 am (UTC)
Heh, thanks! Now if I can only squeeze some actual meaning and plot development into this chapter without creating a veritable rain of anvils, I'll be a happy gal.
sailorpanda
Jul. 26th, 2005 07:50 pm (UTC)
Oooooh. I can't wait. KakaKagome is much smexy love. ^.^
technoelfie
Jul. 28th, 2005 07:08 am (UTC)
♥ I love them together, but I find them both hard to write -- Kakashi more than Kagome. Plus, Kagome is lusting after him already although I don't want her to, not this early in the story.

They're driving me nuts. ^^;
sailorpanda
Jul. 28th, 2005 09:17 am (UTC)
I can imagine. It's one of the difficult things about writing crossovers since it's hard to write characters together who we've never seen interact. But stick with it and I have no doubt that you'll pull through it with flying colors. ^-^
moko_moko
Jul. 26th, 2005 08:18 pm (UTC)
heart!
*is SO giddy now*

(it's funny, lately I've been whining about needing a boyfriend for the sole purpose of dressing him up)

This reads so well, I look forward to obsessing madly over following your evol!manipulation of Kagome on her little..expeditions.
technoelfie
Jul. 28th, 2005 07:09 am (UTC)
Re: heart!
I do have a boyfriend, but usually they're not very amenable to that kind of thing. *sigh*
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