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More fanfic progress.

Worked some more on Hope today. I wrote 1146 words of chapter four (which is not the one I should be working on right now). My progress on chapter three, meanwhile, looks something like this:


Sesshoumaru: "I heard you were dying. Of consumption. Had I known my absence would affect you so, I would have thrown you over my shoulder and carried you off to my lair insisted you accompany me right away."

Kagome (embarrassed): "Oh god. Who told you…" (turns to friends) "You planned this! Traitors!"

Miroku (placatingly): "Now, now, Kagome-sama…"

Kagome: "I'm not consumptive! I'm just a little depressed!" (to Sesshoumaru:) "And it's definitely not because of your absence, you insufferable egomaniac!"

Miroku: "Come, Kagome-sama, a youkai of Sesshoumaru-sama's great power is entitled to a big… ego. Aaanyway, now that Sesshoumaru-sama's here, you can go back with him to his beautiful fortress. I'm sure you'll perk right up in his esteemed company."

Kagome: "Did everybody know he was coming?"

Sango (sheepish): "Not everybody…"

Inuyasha: "Stop making such a fuss. The asshole came down all the way here. He even brought the brat. The least you can do is go back with him so I can bone Kikyo properly again. She's a lot kinkier when you're not around."

Kagome: "I want my mama."


As you can see, this chapter will be a while. Although I just might keep some of the dialogue.

P.S. I made an icon. That's how serious I am about this story.


( 7 comments — Leave a comment )
Aug. 19th, 2009 11:02 pm (UTC)
ha ha, that's hilarious. I read the first chapter of "Hope" yesterday. and i don't normally read S/K. and by normally i mean this is the first time i've read something of the pairing. clearly this is a momentous occassion in my life XD
Aug. 20th, 2009 07:52 am (UTC)
I'm honoured. :) You should be thoroughly confused by now, though...

Edited at 2009-08-20 07:52 am (UTC)
Aug. 20th, 2009 01:45 am (UTC)
.... you've got me squirming in joy. <3~
Aug. 20th, 2009 07:53 am (UTC)
Happy to be of service. ^__^
Aug. 20th, 2009 05:43 pm (UTC)
Aug. 20th, 2009 03:25 am (UTC)
Hee, how exciting!
Aug. 20th, 2009 07:57 am (UTC)
I thought so too! :D
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